I haven't got the words.
Your style is very unique, and of course since no style is 100% perfect, that always leaves the pleasures of improvement! The ending should have been slightly longer to add the eerie lingering effect of that possessed face....Anyways, I like how your tales are revolving around actual events and eye witness accounts, and you use the familiar characters again. Haha, bad things just seem to happen to this kid. I agree with one of the earlier reviews, along with Aokigahara you should find more horror legends to do. Eagerly awaiting your......*Possessed* BDSE;GOEHG!,,,,34772!!@2.......OH shiat. Gotta keep that in check.
OH! And I didn't see it in the credits, and NO ONE else has mentioned it but...The song that is playing is Beni : Kiss kiss kiss. If someone else did reference it, oh well. ^_^